1. To be a good writer you have to become a good writer.
2. Style, clarity and tone are the most important factors in professional writing.
3. When writing to an audience it is vital to maintain credibility while addressing a claim with concerate facts.
These are good starts to potential thesis statements!
ReplyDeleteI personally like your third choice the best. I think that you could potentially elaborate more on it by incorporating your number two thesis statement in.
Maybe.. When creating a writing artifact it is vital to maintain credibility while addressing a claim with concrete facts as well as maintain a professional writing style, clarity, and tone.
I'm not sure if that would exactly work for your paper, but I feel like creating a longer thesis statement allows for you to be able to have a longer and more in-depth paper. Overall good job creating a strong claim!